Thursday, January 5, 2012

journal - 22

In the winter we like to go sledding
An escape from school, which we are dreading

The mountain of snow is a perfect scene
Of the white winter that is so serene

The boys and the girls all young in their hearts
Run to the sledding hill when the snow starts

So innocent and pure is their laughter
The fun of the sledding is seen soon after

zooming down the hill the at the speed of light
The children do rejoice when they take flight

And CRASH go their sleds into a big tree
The children spring back up shouting with glee

When they get tired they plop to the ground
Forming angels in the snow, without sound

Way up and down the big hill they do trek
Waiting for their turn to have their sled wreck

Up the immense hill, the children must climb
It seems to get bigger every time

Jumping and wading in the fluffy snow
Back home is not where they do want to go

But when it gets dark and they go back home
Hot cocoa is there to sip off the foam

Dragging and moping off into their beds
The thoughts of sledding repeats in their heads

Sleep comes quickly, as their mothers assumed
Rest they must get for the sledding presumed







2 comments:

  1. There were a lot of good words, and it met all of the poetic requirements like rhyming and rhythm. I don't know if we are supposed to say something negative this time, but I can't think of anything because it met all the stipulations.

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  2. Morgan, I really liked your poem! It was clever and I enjoyed reading it. I also liked your choice of words.

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